Hi bloggers and readers,
Today i am going to talk about my reading and this is what it looks like because i could not fit all the questions but this is the story and i dose have some spelling mistake [SORRY] hope you like it!
Bye readers and bloggers.
Morning Lucija
ReplyDeleteI liked the way that you attempted this task. I also liked the way that you asked the reader a question so they feel involved. I like reading but I don’t know if I’m good at it.
You’re right, you did have a few spelling mistakes and you might need a few full stops. Take the time to proof read your work because then it’s easier for the reader to read! Look forward to your next post!
Hi lucija, I liked the way you make your posts really cheerful and upbeat. It made me think of my blog. I agree with Marleen about editing your work before you post it. Have a great day!
ReplyDeleteHi Lucija
ReplyDeleteThat was an interesting story it took you on a journey, my son also gets asthma, it can be scary when he goes to hospital but we are lucky we live in New Zealand.
I am wondering do you do Tap dancing? Do you enjoy dancing?
FROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lucija
You have done a lot of work on your reading task Lucija.
I wonder if by proof reading your work before publishing you could check that you have put your text into sentences. This would be helpful in making your blog easier to read. I wonder if you could use a capital "I" when referring to yourself in your writing. I look forward to reading your next text Lucija. From Mrs A