Monday, September 6, 2021

Writing

 Hi bloggers,

Today I am going to go and show you my writing.The writing that I am showing you is were we/my class has to do. The tasks here it is task 1 Writhing change and after we have to do a doc and write it there and then we have to do a blog post on it and that is what I am doing so here is my paragraph.


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  1. Ms Laxa @ NWSSeptember 7, 2021 at 7:57 PM

    Kia ora Lucija,

    I like how you have used the word "nervous" and you have some great ideas. Next time think about rereading your story. Does it make sense aloud? Are there any sentences that are too long?

    Looking forward to future blog posts,
    Miss Laxa

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